Heart break

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    IVE been badly broken hearted

    Heart break

    love is not worth the pain.
    pain is not worth the life i live.
    im my heart that loved u so.
    oh why did you let me go.

    for now im stuck in a state of mind thinking
    i thought you were mine,
    with love not knowing where to go.
    we still move on.

    never do we look at the future,
    we dwell on the past,
    on the memorys that we shared,
    on life that was unfair.

    we never will find love like this,
    never feel this kiss,
    never say those words,
    never wonder what if,

    yet im fine with that,
    the stenght i have
    is more than you can have,
    more than you can stand

    yes my heart is broken
    yet i will survie
    my heart may never heal
    yet i wont stand,

    to be broken by you
    to be hurt by you
    to be scared by you
    to be blamed by you,

    you blame me for what happened,
    you blame me for the break,
    you say im not worth it
    well guess what

    what about us?
    a relationship stands for two people
    and yet you blame me
    one person.

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    CMarsh commented on Heart break

    09-21-2009

    Your words are very true, love is always a two way street but too many time it's a one way steet leading to a dead end. This one is one of your best.

    SWolfBlood commented on Heart break

    09-21-2009

    I like this poem. I can relate to it right about now.... Very good!

    Chelles commented on Heart break

    09-20-2009

    This was a wonderful read. I have written something similar. Your heart will heal with time...believe it or not...But because of the pain you were/are in, you created a beautiful poem

    cmlestrade commented on Heart break

    09-19-2009

    I Like this very much. I am sorry your heart was broken but believe it or not from the depths of that pain you will pull emotions that will enrich your writing, not that that's a comfort. Keep writing because the talent you have may one day become your greatest love and it won't be shallow ,won't desert you, will live in and be controlled by you. Now that's love.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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