Her Story

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    Her Story

    as she sits there wondering
    her thoughts no one can see
    but the look in her eyes tell
    something is not as it should be
    you can tell she fights a sadness
    deep down in her soul
    the lines around her eyes
    shows sadness taking its toll
    she holds so much inside
    not letting anybody near
    holding onto the pain
    forgetting, is that her fear
    no one knows her story
    never ventures to ask
    about the sadness in her eyes
    it just isn't their task
    but i feel compelled
    by that sadness in her eyes
    daring to venture forth
    daring to ask why
    she tells me a story
    the loss of a love so great
    the pain that never ends
    over losing her soul mate
    how she chose to be alone
    never to love again
    waiting until the time
    to once again be with him
    as she finished her story
    she slowly closed her eyes
    for the life of me
    i couldn't figure why
    then a smile crossed her face
    and i knew in my mind
    with the burden of her story told
    she left this world behind
    the smile that she left
    on the face that held no life
    was a smile for the husband
    who came to get his wife

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    bandit1192 commented on Her Story

    07-29-2009

    Beautiful..... Well written.... I loved the story. You have that touch with your writing that draws the reader in and captures their imagination. I'm a fan. TS

    borderflower

    08/09/2009

    thank you very much

    Christine56 commented on Her Story

    05-28-2009

    I am seldom at a loss for words, but i cannot even begin to express my feelings as I read this poem and all your others.. You are truly an amazing writer and without hesitance I will venture to guess an equally amazing lady! Your writing is absolutely breathtaking and definately has touched my heart.. I wish you all the best and look forward to reading more of your poems that hopefully will express some happiness you surely deserve!!

    peacefully commented on Her Story

    04-03-2009

    I loved this poem. I understand that kind of love for a soul mate. Keep up the good work.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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