It's over we're through

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    Sometimes love can really be elusive

    It's over we're through

    We've been together now it's almost a year
    We know each other's secrets and each others' fear
    We are as one, yet all seems to go wrong
    We started out talking now the talking is gone

    You got up this morning one thought in your head
    You showered and dressed and off to work you sped
    You left that note on the table by the front door
    Why didn't I see what was there was in store?

    I can't stand the thought that we're are over we're through
    Why does it always show up right out of the blue
    I wish we could have talked out the reasons
    I was sure we had the love of all seasons

    Why does love treat lovers like the sifting sand
    Why can't it be solid like rock on dry land
    When will love let me find someone who is real?
    Why won't this love find me that knid of deal

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