Leaving On A Jetplane

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  • viejay04
  • I would like to thank everyone for reading my poems and for giving me positive feedbacks! You guys keep me more inspired! I thank you all with all my heart! =)

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This is not a great poem, but a real poet shares his/her work....great or not... =)

Leaving On A Jetplane

Hugs are given to those who will be missed.

A tender kiss is shared by two souls
Who will be separated in a matter of time.

A mother, with tears on her eyes, waves goodbye
To her daughter who will experience the world on her own.

A father is patting his son's shoulder
And pull him closer and said "I love you, son!".

Smiles are being worn by these four friends
For they're all excited to relax and have fun!

A guy who's sitting in the corner with a phone on his hand
Is talking to his sick mother and tells her he's coming home.

And as for me, my bags are all packed
And as a matter of fact
They're all being checked in and
Now I'm sitting here by Gate 23
Waiting for my departure.

I'm now leaving on a jetplane!

I'll be in my lover's arms few hours from now!

 

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dahlusion commented on Leaving On A Jetplane

03-26-2010

Beautiful, simply beautiful, a poetic diamond.....Bravo!!! peace and Light, Dah

viejay04

03/26/2010

thanks dah! Peace and light to you as well =)

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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