Less of a Man

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Inspired by a song called "The Dress", by Blonde Redhead

Less of a Man

The tears on my face

and my empty hand

have nothing to do

nothing to lose

 

people hate the cheater

struck lightning into my eyes

 

less of a love

a war in disguise

 

who you are is less than you know

 

the tears on my face

have nothing to do

with the fear you gave me

the fear of your cheating

 

and lightning strikes as you move

 

don't love me,

just wonder

this is less than you know

 

don't trust you

less of a man

I want to forget

all that you know

 

11-23-2010

 

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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