Let me end this sorrow

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    well,this isn't really a poem...I edited "Angels of the Moon" to become this...it's a piece of 55 fiction, the point being to tell a story with 55 words or less. Gah, this was hard...but 49 words,FTW!

    Let me end this sorrow

     She was lying on her bed, moving through twisted dreams of this world full of lies.
    "I wish I could break free of this sorrow..."she whispered, as the razorblades dancing across her wrists helped to ease her pain forever, leaving nothing but her sobbing mother in it's wake.

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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