i can't...

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    i can't...
    the gun's at me lips,
    cold metal against warm skin.
    I think of my misery,
    I think of my happiness.
    the saddness rules me,and
    This is the only way to end it.
    The only way to end the suffering and
    the lonilness.
    But I still can't pull the trigger.
    I can't leave my family,broken as it is.
    I can't leave my life.
    I can't leave my dreams.
    I'm not ready to give it all up yet.....

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    gjmichele77 commented on i can't...

    05-09-2009

    Tori...excellent job. I have been there and that is exactly how it feels. I may have messed up your rating as the system is not responding properly. gjmichele77
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    PawPrint commented on i can't...

    03-19-2009

    This is just beautiful!!!!!
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    Bladebearer commented on i can't...

    03-18-2009

    I've been there.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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