a group poem

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    A renga from a class

    a group poem

    1)The charcoal wolf breaks the cold winter silence, throwing his head back to howl mournfully at the moon.
    2)The teenage girl cries softly,lost in this world chaotic world,trapped within a human mind.
    3)Humming quietly-noisy silence is broken.
    4)The kitten playfully pushed the glass on the counter,not expecting its fall.
    5)The cold breeze pf the wind made the doors on the shed slam shut.
    6)Shut out of his life forever,a mother mourns the loss of her son,though he is still alive to feel otherwise.
    7)Pictures soaked for memories are only left.
    8)A museum of the past surrounds her while she gazes at younger faces that all belong to her.
    9)The sound of shattering glass pulls all attention,silences the commotion.
    10)the silence,will set you free.
    11)poor sonnet: maybe it wanted to say something that would break the rules.
    12)The man was wealthy but his run-ins with the law made him poor.
    13)Run down with the knowledge he would never return home.
    14)Tears stained the tulip outside the precious morning and mixed with the dew

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