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I stand here looking at

The ocean, letting the

wind play with my hair,

pulling it back and

whipping it forward.

I listen to the waves

tilting my head to the

sky and closing my

eyes.

the air smells like the

ocean, pure and calm.

I hear someone call

to me, and I turn to

see who. my

friend is calling my

name, and I wave to her,

a smile on my lips.

I turn to fast, and

the rock crumbles

beneath my feet.

I lose my balance,

and tumble down

to the waves crashing below.

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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