Mind Fuck

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  • jude
  • says what is status to true life anyways

Mind Fuck

Fucking superman life fake candy land all plastic cracking waiting for time just goes on and on never betters only wrong and clouds drifting time sifting mind untying ethics in me losing faith and gaining hate left the ones I leave to late and all this to show I’m still someone I don’t even know without the chance to drift, without a glance to shift-sideways mumbles shady shadowing eyes blah blah blah jumbled out of those lips lies like the sense you make shaking breaking and taking me, just say what you need, just say what you need for whatever fucking purpose—boils down to yourself and whatever makes you feel satiated expect me to be what? Sedated? I could mind fuck all of you, but instead I mind fuck myself because it’s all wrong, nothing is right spaced out dotted lines on the road take flight might graze the skin of the woman I’m in—leave the scratch scrape blister, mister I’m the one I’m with

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devaamido commented on Mind Fuck

10-25-2009

We've all got several choices: (1) You can combat the parts of it you view as evil until one of "them" kills you, (2) You can talk about it, like you're doing (from your personal perspective, I've gotta add) or (3) REALIZE that it's not your job to separate the world into "good" and "bad" so much, as to UNDERSTAND it. Your poem's factually correct & well expressed, but SO WHAT?

LEAKINGPEN commented on Mind Fuck

09-09-2009

Wow, this is the best description of the way a lot of people be thinking in life. Other people in life will have have us hating life when the whole time we just be getting mind F**ked!!!!! I really like this poem. Don't rush your writing. What you put down be worth the wait...love your stuff

jude

11/29/2009

Thanks, I appreciate the comments.

causeofbalance commented on Mind Fuck

07-01-2009

this is brilliant!! i love it, it deals with so much. reminds me of some of my stuff. seems the societal constraints upon us have unabled us to grow, keepin us stagnant. i like also how you make the point that we are not our physical bodies, this is pretty stoic. there is something more to life than the pretty little plastic land we live in. genius :)

jude

07/06/2009

Thanks. I love it when stuff comes out like that. There are parts in there that I don't fully understand yet, which has always been the way for my best. Sometime down the line it all becomes crystal clear to me. I am sorry I haven't been reading poems and commenting lately...time, time, time. I mostly just come here to post when I have written something suitable. It's sad that so many of my best words come in letters to people about life. I appreciate the appreciation though, thanks.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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