One Big Lie

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    One Big Lie
    My world it spins round and round
    But I have yet to touch the ground
    My life it seems like one big trap
    It almost seems to overlap
    I really don't know what to do
    To find the inside of the truth
    I search and search and still I find
    That this world is one big lie

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    Nadia1986 commented on One Big Lie

    03-16-2010

    Your right sometimes it feels like we are stuck in world of lies but you know what that only means that we have to fight even harder to find the truth.
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    RCLUVAE commented on One Big Lie

    02-25-2009

    i like this peom its good. its kind of shirt but u hit all the points that u feel. thats wat makes a good poem.
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    SistaJessie commented on One Big Lie

    02-24-2009

    I love it...its short but it express your emotions very well!
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    moonchild commented on One Big Lie

    02-23-2009

    Very nice write.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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