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  • jessicalynn2k3
  • Made a new poem you all should read it and rate it XD its really good <3

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Why does it feel like a stab in the heart,
when I see you right there and then you just part
It's killing me slowly, you don't even know
The pain that I feel when I watch you go!
Its ripping my heart into four parts not three
I tell you I love you, but do you love me
The questions remaining and Im still waiting
Is our love really true or is it just fading?

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Paradice21 commented on Question

11-30-2009

This is a very nice, sad and heartfelt poem! You write very well! Keep it up!!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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