The Hidden Message

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  • jessicalynn2k3
  • Made a new poem you all should read it and rate it XD its really good <3

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I wrote this because right then in that moment off time, that was exactly what I felt.

The Hidden Message

Came home from school no homework to do
Just got off my school bus number 202
So here I am now sitting in my room
Tired, bored don't know what to do
I look out my window right up at the sky
Watching closely as the clouds roll by
I count the birds two, four, six, eight
They're flying in many different shapes
I lay on my bed and stare at the ceiling
Observing it slowly as I find it's peeling
I stand on my bed and jump up to touch it
Right off it comes as if like a rocket
Small pieces at first as they all start to fall
Scrape some off the ceiling and then off the wall
Impressed I am looking at not only white
But black, blue and purple that were painted real light
But what caught my eye most was in big green letters
They say "Do Not Give Up, For Life Will Get Better!"

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Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

jessicalynn2k3’s Poems (20)

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The Questions 0
Do You Ever 0
What is this feeling? 1
The Hidden Message 0
Question 1
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Michael Jackson 0
Please Sam 1
What Should I Do 1
Slavery 0
Im Free 0
Our World 0
Her Chance 1
You To Me 0
Out of Order 0
I Try 0
It Hurts 2
One Big Lie 4
Suicide 1
Cats 1