Precious

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    Precious

    Communication lies with the foundation of love

    Beneath the waves

    I can hear you,

    With desperation and pride

    Over and over again,

    I love you!

     

    That was a statement I couldn't put pass you

    Even when I was doubting you.

    Or at the least when I was doubting us.

    You show me love,

    Not only through the gentleness of touch

    with the desires of meaning.

     

    If you try to take that away from me

    I'm not me.

    I'm a little girl standing on my dad's sidewalk,

    Alone with myself.

    A little girl standing at the bus stop,

    Anxious.


    Alone with myself.

    A little girl asking,

    "Why?"

    Alone with myself.

     

    I am me with you

    I'm myself even though.

    With you, I am a woman

    Walking in the city

    Wanting and yearning for the qualification of respect

    You show me nothing less.

     

    I'm a flower fully bloomed in late May

    Fertile and uncorrupted, aspiring for nothing.

    You're my companion beside me

    Giving up

    Everything for me

    Everything.

     

    When I shall bleed for the sun

    You bleed with me.

    And give up one to many petals

    To replace my own.

    I am precious

    You always told me that.

     

    With you,

    I am in love. 

    With love,

    Always!

     

     

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    BikemanRJ commented on Precious

    04-19-2010

    You show me nothing less.....Giving up everything for me...I am precious you always told me that.......Wow a very beautiful and strong love great poem. God Bless Randy

    Marmorl73

    04/22/2010

    Thanks! :-)

    koolmom0 commented on Precious

    04-17-2010

    This is beautiful, love should always be unconditional. :) Kool

    Marmorl73

    04/18/2010

    Thanks so much for taking the time to read my poem. :-)

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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