Promise

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    Written May 27, 2004

    Promise

    I don't care for what
    You have to say.
    Don't desecrate my pain,
    As if it's not the same!
    Thinking I don't know life,
    Sayin I haven't been there,
    But I've been through my share,
    Just to make it clear!

    I'll make a promise to me
    To remember thirteen,
    The stupid things I've said,
    Crazy things I've done.
    And the betrayal by the ones
    Who were close to me.
    Its all made me strong
    For when I turn twenty-one

    I'll remember falling in love
    At age fifteen,
    Smiles on my face,
    Bad dreams when I sleep.
    Depression that ran like a river
    In my veins.
    And a broken heart
    At age sixteen.

    You say you've been there?
    But you don't compare.

    I'll remember
    The day I wanted to die.
    The night I wanted to live.
    The time I said "I'll survive!"
    And the moment I did.

    Could this truly mean,
    I've been places you've never seen?

    What do I know?
    I'm almost seventeen.

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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