Shon and Gabriel

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    Shon and Gabriel

    When I think about my life
    Any difference I have made
    by simply being a Mother and Wife
    setting aside the plans I'd laid

    Sometimes it feels like I copped out
    of the future I had in sight;
    Like somehow I dropped out
    of the race I'd run so tight.

    But then a thought comes to my mind
    when I observe my fine young sons
    what an unimagineable loss it would be
    to have never known the ones

    who are the very beat of my heart,
    who bring me joy untold;
    Who love me back with such devotion
    and kisses not withhold

    Now they pat me on the head
    and joke 'Mom you're outta touch'
    Oh my God how can I ever thank you
    for these boys I love so much!

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    bobzoom commented on Shon and Gabriel

    04-08-2009

    A beautiful poem well done i loved it great work again.

    Phoenix9 commented on Shon and Gabriel

    03-30-2009

    How true, children complete us and thier love fullfils us. very nice poem

    bandit1192 commented on Shon and Gabriel

    03-28-2009

    Well done. I know exactly what you mean. Don't know what I'd do without my kids. TS

    aggieprof commented on Shon and Gabriel

    03-28-2009

    I really like the last stanza. I am also impressed with your ability to write in different styles.

    Drivingczar commented on Shon and Gabriel

    03-27-2009

    A rather nice path you've taken us on and your words are colorful leaves strewn along!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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    Mama's table 9
    Shon and Gabriel 7
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