silence

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    silence

    slowly I sink into this quiet abyss....

    walls of silence surround....

    where is the laughter I so miss...

    where is the love we found....

    what happened to the dreams we had..

    have they faded like the sunset....

    all that was happy now seems sad...

    and left with empty regret....

    the words won't come we used to speak...

    the ones that made us smile...

    that took us to the highest peak...

    to rest for a while...

    and now the silence deafens me...

    and soon the truth will be known...

    for you no longer see me...

    and then you will be gone.....

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    cousinsoren commented on silence

    03-14-2010

    With a stretch of the imagiantion we can hear silence. Silence possesses strange sounds. Such sounds are either of nostalgia, solitude, meditation or introspection sadness and other moods. This poem seems to suggest a yearning for what was bedore, a sort of nostagia. It is a perfect and pleasant cccomposition. My rating is a full 10,

    stellar commented on silence

    10-15-2009

    As i notice...some of your poems theme is about fading...fading like the season..it's kind of cyclic but nevertheless i love it

    joyce commented on silence

    10-05-2009

    I seek solace where there is none.... this poem is sooooooooo nice...though so sad,....

    1990lh commented on silence

    09-26-2009

    ah likethis a lot the mood is kinda sad but that pk i still like the poem nice write

    Ron

    09/28/2009

    Thank you very much for your comment and I am very pleased that you enjoyed it...

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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