So Untitled

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So Untitled

The mentality beyond this metaphoric matrix meliorates in my mind stimulating subliminal messages into the reality of faithfulness,
lies upon lies compile lies like the attraction of
shit and flies

 Water that is calm soothes the heart excites
the eye like a diamond surrounded by light,
 the heartbeats of many men are as strong as one
and my mind stimulates subliminal messages from the depths of my soul

Matrix - a situation controlled or not desires to be explored to the core of its energy,
when my mind is freed, the body and soul
will follow interrupting the steady rhythm of a chaotic interlude

This life i live will soon be at rest
and when the battle is won and my work is done
 i pray that the Lord will welcome me home

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ginga commented on So Untitled

07-30-2009

Liq, A masterful alliterative poem which I happen to like and I often use in my poems. (check out Tidal Shift & Onslaught). I love the deeper meaning here the philosophical message, the use of water as a metaphor, and subliminal is a great poetic word although I never have used it but it works here. Thanx for posting all your intriguing poems for me to read! ginga

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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