Naked

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Naked

Uncensored penetration buries me beneath
the flesh of your subsistence
releasing endangered endorphins from encasement
when i inquired knowing your nakedness,
that was
a metaphoric request of my inquest
to know
where the intellectual status lies between
you and i
cause naked came we into existence
and naked shall i know the queen
chosen to exhilarate my throne
so
if you love me black, then love me as we
drop the empty pursuit of props
strip down to the bare essence of a psychoactive
union
for eclectic words will undoubtedly unveil
the form fitted shell surrounding your
curvaceous mass,
effectuating me to drop my mastery
but to converse
is what has to be the canalizing route
to knowing whether our hearts would survive
beyond this romantic interlude
so tell me,
can you entice my heart
my intellectual sense
with romantic expressions,
undress your mind and explore in total nakedness 
the connection between love and romantic
possibilities
leaving nothing in concealment even as i 
in spoken word
have revealed my inner most entity
see i can love you with all my heart 
but to love with heart, body and soul 
having nothing to spare is what romantics consider
a rarity, pure unadulterated exposure
so when you decide to
offer your body
give to me you mind as we entwine
our nakedness 
and give to me your hand
`cause I'll be damned if i refuse to soar without you
into ecstasy
and though this is no fairytale
i fanty-see us in a world of parallelism

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Tempy commented on Naked

07-16-2009

very lovely open and thought revealing and erotic compramise

PoeticLiqueur

07/20/2009

Hey thank you, I appreciate your words.

pwangai commented on Naked

07-13-2009

Candid and playful, in a mentally sensous way. I liked it.

PoeticLiqueur

07/13/2009

Thank you for your comment, I appreciate that

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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