Taco's

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  • babygirl4028
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blongno

Taco's

Taco's
They are crunchy
Or soft
You pick
I like soft
Taco's ate the spaghetti taco man
The spaghetti taco man wasn't a man though
He was a boy
He didn't have time to live
WHY DID U DO THAT!!!!!!
I love you taco's but you can't go eating people
NOW GO TO YOUR ROOM!!!!!!
You are now grounded
I will eat you later
I am mad at you right now
Okay goodnight salad. 

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jessicanichole8 commented on Taco's

11-02-2010

i love taco they taste so good the dog was on the cat who was on the taco and ate the spaghtti

jessicanichole8

11/03/2010

it is so sad i think i am going to cry :(

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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