Taco's

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blongno

Taco's

Taco's
They are crunchy
Or soft
You pick
I like soft
Taco's ate the spaghetti taco man
The spaghetti taco man wasn't a man though
He was a boy
He didn't have time to live
WHY DID U DO THAT!!!!!!
I love you taco's but you can't go eating people
NOW GO TO YOUR ROOM!!!!!!
You are now grounded
I will eat you later
I am mad at you right now
Okay goodnight salad. 

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jessicanichole8 commented on Taco's

11-02-2010

i love taco they taste so good the dog was on the cat who was on the taco and ate the spaghtti

jessicanichole8

11/03/2010

it is so sad i think i am going to cry :(

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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