Here comes goodbye

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    Here comes goodbye

     I know you left for a reason
    I just didn't know it would be like this
    I saw it coming
    I had it coming
    I just didn't know it would be this soon
    I saw you come up
    Looking like you always do
    Hair so bright and eyes so blue
    I didn't know it when i saw
    The way you said it
    Tear drops hit the floor
    As i realized with burning eyes
    Here come goodbye
    I loved you with all of my heart
    That wasn't enough
    You wanted more
    I couldn't give you more than my poorness could
    I gave you the best i could
    Which was my heart
     I don't know how to start
    I will live on without you
    It will be hard to get up
    No reason
    Here comes goodbye
    GOODBYE 

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    bubbles12 commented on Here comes goodbye

    11-04-2010

    this is a good poem i love it you are ver creative !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    babygirl4028

    11/04/2010

    thx .

    ImStillHere commented on Here comes goodbye

    11-04-2010

    this is a very nice poem, Babygirl. it kinda has the sappy heartbreak, but thats a good thing. :) ~Audrey
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    babygirl4028

    11/04/2010

    thx.

    jessicanichole8 commented on Here comes goodbye

    11-04-2010

    awwwww that is so sad and sweet.. who is it it isnt who i am thinking of cuz he has brown eyes they are so adorable
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    babygirl4028

    11/04/2010

    its just someone.

    jessicanichole8

    11/04/2010

    who codie???

    babygirl4028

    11/04/2010

    No

    jessicanichole8

    11/04/2010

    who please tell me?????????????????? :(

    babygirl4028

    11/04/2010

    nuh uh.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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