The Color of Caramel

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    I hope you enjoy the world of my racial ethnicity through the sweet taste of caramel.

    The Color of Caramel

    I have always been the color of caramel, sweet candy that sticks to your gums and teeth. I have always been in between the lines and asked, "Are you from India, Brazil, West India, and everywhere else where English is broken and fallen and spoken little. But in my skin of caramel, Is a sweetness Of being able to blend, And send love around the world. And a beauty like no other where connections could be lost. And misconceptions misconstrued. Where people judge because you are not like them. Blessings to Caramel, I say. I am proud of Caramel, Sweet, sticky candy Like me who will stay with you lLong after the taste is gone. The beauty of the beige and the beauty of audacity To know that beauty really is within. And yet, we stop, "breathtaking we say!" And I know that it is then that caramel Is best, and sweet and good and memorable.

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    desia commented on The Color of Caramel

    09-21-2010

    This is awesome, great work, my friend, so well said.

    chopkins123 commented on The Color of Caramel

    09-20-2010

    THANK YOU FRIENDS AND FELLOW POETS FOR ENCOURAGEMENT AND FEEDBACK.

    SerenityWintirs commented on The Color of Caramel

    09-19-2010

    This is amazing. It expresses so much personal pride and inner beauty. I really think that I get what you are saying here. It is expressed in a vivid, concise way that is moving and enriching

    chopkins123

    09/20/2010

    Thank you, Serenity. Your encouragement and analysis means a lot.

    lonewolf commented on The Color of Caramel

    09-18-2010

    another beautiful write. caramel is by far the best of candies. thanks for sharing, and i'm looking forward to reading more.

    Mandi commented on The Color of Caramel

    09-18-2010

    I love caramel It sticks with one long after it's been swallowed. like friends stick together.:) nice , sweet way to look at things.

    chopkins123

    09/18/2010

    Thank you, Mandi.

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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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