The Four Horsemen part 1

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  • kpeery09
  • "Never Compromise not even in the face of Armageddon"-Jackie Earle Haley as Rorschach from Watchmen movie

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This is the first of four parts, as you can probably guess this is the first horsemen War.

The Four Horsemen part 1

Our world feels the change happening.
The peace, posperity,and life changing,
there I saw the red mustang vehicle.
The children were taken by there fathers or mothers,
shot in the head they were.
The husbands and wives killed each other,
teenagers took knives to there girlfriends and cut there throats.
I witnessed not slaughter but fight for survival, like war.
There I saw the wormwood on the walls, street lights, even the cars; all but one car had wormwood on it.
There a man watched a side of humanity destroy peace and introduce anarchy.
The horseman War, drove us into madness and chaos.

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Chaos128 commented on The Four Horsemen part 1

05-11-2010

There's something in the air, all right. i can't say what it is but I sure feel it. i like the "You Are There" technique. I'm on to the next chapter.

eddie14 commented on The Four Horsemen part 1

04-29-2010

that sounds like the goverment there good at doing things like that

1990lh commented on The Four Horsemen part 1

04-26-2010

wow I find this poem very interesting thoughts like those seem to go through everyone head these days

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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