The Four Point Pain

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    this was just thoughts written in poetry form. this was the first time my mom was so outraged at me and as she spoke and yelled and screamed. i day dreamed. in day dream land these words ran around so i wrote them down.

    The Four Point Pain

    A simply task
    turned to shadder glass.
    A smile in the air
    a tear you can't bare.
    A laugh at a joke
    a slap or just stoke.
    A spin in your chain
    those eyes just stares.
    At the confused child standing here.
    a voice with a boom
    a look at her room
    waiting to run there
    moster feet comes near
    speak if you dare.
    Hands once contained
    Shes a queen
    self proclaimed
    Zuse with his pitchfork
    everything went dark
    SPAIN?!?!
    No the four point pain.

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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