whisper

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    • is trudging, try, wandering thru, trying to find what I'm to do.

    whisper

     WHISPER

    A moms life-the brightest flame
    all who know you, know her name
    Sitting above, long since gone
    Still you swear you hear her song
    The soft sweet lullaby of love
    Gently soothing her ruffled dove
    A broken house fallen down
    Only her memories hold to the ground.

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    Charlie23 commented on whisper

    10-04-2009

    There is so much peace in this poem! Absolutely beautiful!
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    SILKYTWEED commented on whisper

    09-09-2009

    Beautiful (smiling) this is a very uplifting piece...Love does conquer in memories that light the darkness of someone who has moved on....Thanks for sharing!
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    klassik commented on whisper

    09-01-2009

    very nice, well written! .
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    Hampton commented on whisper

    09-01-2009

    A soft and haunting refrain created with beautiful simplicity. Nicely done.
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    jademelissa74 commented on whisper

    09-01-2009

    You have crafted such a lovable piece. The truth you speak of is very warm. Great job!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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