Why?

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    Why?

    Why are things as they are?
    Why can't I wish on my lucky star
    For things to change to better not worse?
    Why do I feel as if a curse
    As been placed on me?
    Why can't anyone see
    The feelings swirling inside of me?
    Why do I feel as if I let everyone down?
    Why do I feel as if I've been shoved ot the ground
    Again? Never to get up again.
    I know, my Lord, that you are with me,
    But why can't I see
    You here with me?
    Why are things as they are?
    Will they ever be better or are
    They doomed to be worse?

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    frog commented on Why?

    04-26-2010

    Wow. This poem really hit home for me. Remaining in position through testing times is such a difficult and painstaking process. Hang in there. It's worth it...in God's time!

    JOZLEAIN commented on Why?

    11-18-2009

    Im feeling your poem. I understand your pain with it. Also i wanted you to give more on how you came out or if your still in that mood. I wanted you to finish it up strong for me. I like it just next time finish out with a complete thought.

    christliked commented on Why?

    11-18-2009

    It seems that we are both going through the same type of thingand I have got something, the struggles and the barriers are not really obstacles but building blocks for success. These things are our setbacks, and once we proceed beyond them we grow

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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