You Can't See The Teardrops In The Rain

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    You Can't See The Teardrops In The Rain

     I guess it's time
    To say goodbye to yesterday
    Though I really can't say
    Where it all went wrong
    A heart's supposed to be
    Shielded by faith
    But we all end up Singing
    The same song

    So when the skies turn grey
    You can bet on where I'll be
    Out in the midst
    Soaking up the reality
    And searching for an answer
    To put an end to all the pain
    And you can't see the teardrops
    In the Rain

    So speak no more to me
    Of love that's pure and free
    For deep inside I know 
    That there's a price to pay
    For Love's caused me
    To favor the night
    And dread each break of day

    For with the night
    Comes my mind's eye
    This slumber I wish not to part
    And in the day
    The light shines on
    The void
    Within my heart

    So when the skies turn grey
    You can bet on where I'll be
    Out in the midst
    Soaking up the reality
    And searching for an answer
    To put an end to all the pain
    And you can't see the teardrops
    In the Rain

    No you can't see the teardrops
    In the Rain

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    Teardrops commented on You Can't See The Teardrops In The Rain

    12-21-2009

    wonderful poem full of your inner heart and the love you will find again some day loved it
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    vancelemley

    05/09/2013

    Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I truly appreciate it,

    Slimmest commented on You Can't See The Teardrops In The Rain

    10-14-2009

    This is a beautiful work, and kind of odd to love a sad poem, but dictions and writting is just soothing!. Am keeping it as one of my favorites
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    vancelemley

    05/09/2013

    Thank you so much Slimmest.

    Nadia1986 commented on You Can't See The Teardrops In The Rain

    10-14-2009

    I really liked the read very sweet and bitter sad the rain fits in very nicely.
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    vancelemley

    05/09/2013

    Thank you Nadia.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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