You Told Me It Would Be This Way
Was it different-
When you thought
every sculpted line
had a bit of you-
a bit of me?
Now-
When my mind is
muttled by others-
new situations-
new places-
new things-
do you find it's simply
not the same?
Is your mind muttled-
with jealousy-
heartbreak-
betrayal-
do you feel replaced?
Push me away
when you told me
that it would end-
Well now you're right-
it ended up this way . . .
Every sculpted line-
had a bit of you-
a bit of me . . .
toredbloodink commented on You Told Me It Would Be This Way
03-14-2017
kingone43 commented on You Told Me It Would Be This Way
07-28-2009
07/28/2009
In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.
Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
|---|---|---|
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
| No One Can Understand | 2 | 07/16/2009 |
| Reckless Behavior | 2 | 06/17/2009 |
| I Smile for You | 4 | 07/06/2009 |
| I Remember the Days | 1 | 05/29/2009 |
| To Be a Muse | 1 | 05/29/2009 |
| There's No Beauty in the Breakdown | 3 | 05/29/2009 |
| Celtic Background Music | 1 | 05/29/2009 |
| You Told Me It Would Be This Way | 2 | 05/29/2009 |
| Untitled | 1 | 05/29/2009 |
| What Keeps Me Alive | 0 | 05/29/2009 |
| Confused, With My Head Ducked in Laughter | 1 | 05/29/2009 |
| In That Instant | 0 | 05/29/2009 |
| Tattered Perfection | 2 | 05/29/2009 |
| Criticism | 1 | 05/29/2009 |
| Good Ol' Life Experience | 0 | 05/29/2009 |
| Confusion | 1 | 05/29/2009 |
| Words | 1 | 05/29/2009 |
| Standing | 0 | 06/05/2009 |
| Untitled | 1 | 06/05/2009 |
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