While my mind is off somewhere
My heart remains the same
Voices saying you aren't there
But I get chills from hearing Your name

Somethings there, it's in the air
Indescribable, as they say
A book that says your everywhere
And every promise remains

So towards the sky, I raise my hands
Relying on nothing but faith
On my knees, I feel the land
Now forever, I have been changed

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DreamerGirl17 commented on Changed


awww that is adorable I love the beauty of the passion in the poem.

Phoenix9 commented on Changed


WOW powerful write, love the way it flows and is a joy to read, well done

Qualin commented on Changed


everyone has their reception of the greatest love one could ever find I havn't really looked at it this way but you got my attention a great write ....very good...friend Qualin

HannahLynn commented on Changed



Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

HannahLynn’s Poems (15)

Title Comments
Title Comments
I Can't Love You That Way 4
Where Did You Go? 6
Me 6
See You Soon 4
May I Have This Dance? 8
Unforgetable Times 9
I Hope She Knows 6
The Angels Song 5
Bring on the Rain 3
Changed 5
I Believe 5
Alabama Meadow 9
Mine 4
I Love You, Too 3
Your Litte Girl 3