While my mind is off somewhere
My heart remains the same
Voices saying you aren't there
But I get chills from hearing Your name

Somethings there, it's in the air
Indescribable, as they say
A book that says your everywhere
And every promise remains

So towards the sky, I raise my hands
Relying on nothing but faith
On my knees, I feel the land
Now forever, I have been changed

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DreamerGirl17 commented on Changed


awww that is adorable I love the beauty of the passion in the poem.

Phoenix9 commented on Changed


WOW powerful write, love the way it flows and is a joy to read, well done

Qualin commented on Changed


everyone has their reception of the greatest love one could ever find I havn't really looked at it this way but you got my attention a great write ....very good...friend Qualin

HannahLynn commented on Changed



To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

HannahLynn’s Poems (15)

Title Comments
Title Comments
I Can't Love You That Way 4
Where Did You Go? 6
Me 6
See You Soon 4
May I Have This Dance? 8
Unforgetable Times 9
I Hope She Knows 6
The Angels Song 5
Bring on the Rain 3
Changed 5
I Believe 5
Alabama Meadow 9
Mine 4
I Love You, Too 3
Your Litte Girl 3