May I Have This Dance?

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May I Have This Dance?

Go and venture off
Get lost in this world
Go and find life's meaning
Painted within a mural
Take the soonest flight
Away to France
But before you leave,
May I have this dance?

Forgive and forget
Just don't forget me
Let go of your burdens
Before chasing your dreams
If i could be so lucky
As to have one glance
The tune has begun
May I have this dance?

January is here
Time isn't our friend
The ache that I feel
I swear it, won't end
I'm stunned by your wonder
Let it happen by chance
Before I'm forgotten
May I have this dance?

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arronpalmer commented on May I Have This Dance?

10-18-2010

Love this. The short but sweeping lines really convey a sense of dance. You should be proud of this piece, it's great.

HannahLynn

10/19/2010

Thank you, darling. :)

cheronld commented on May I Have This Dance?

09-23-2010

I wish all lost loves could end in such a beautiful way....I can so relate....its always just one more nite before you go...with the ones who touched you so...nicely done...Cher

HannahLynn commented on May I Have This Dance?

09-22-2010

Thank you guys. :D

lonewolf commented on May I Have This Dance?

09-21-2010

this could very easily be the words to a song for a romantic comedy. i really enjoyed this piece.

ImStillHere commented on May I Have This Dance?

09-21-2010

i like how this poem gives you the sense that one is running away... 10 ~Audrey

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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