May I Have This Dance?

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  • Passion

    May I Have This Dance?

    Go and venture off
    Get lost in this world
    Go and find life's meaning
    Painted within a mural
    Take the soonest flight
    Away to France
    But before you leave,
    May I have this dance?

    Forgive and forget
    Just don't forget me
    Let go of your burdens
    Before chasing your dreams
    If i could be so lucky
    As to have one glance
    The tune has begun
    May I have this dance?

    January is here
    Time isn't our friend
    The ache that I feel
    I swear it, won't end
    I'm stunned by your wonder
    Let it happen by chance
    Before I'm forgotten
    May I have this dance?

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    arronpalmer commented on May I Have This Dance?

    10-18-2010

    Love this. The short but sweeping lines really convey a sense of dance. You should be proud of this piece, it's great.
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    HannahLynn

    10/19/2010

    Thank you, darling. :)

    cheronld commented on May I Have This Dance?

    09-23-2010

    I wish all lost loves could end in such a beautiful way....I can so relate....its always just one more nite before you go...with the ones who touched you so...nicely done...Cher
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    HannahLynn commented on May I Have This Dance?

    09-22-2010

    Thank you guys. :D
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    lonewolf commented on May I Have This Dance?

    09-21-2010

    this could very easily be the words to a song for a romantic comedy. i really enjoyed this piece.
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    ImStillHere commented on May I Have This Dance?

    09-21-2010

    i like how this poem gives you the sense that one is running away... 10 ~Audrey
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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