I Believe

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I Believe

Savior, Savior 
You openly bleed 
You bring your presence 
and I'm down on my knees 
There's no other 
No other for me 
Such a beautiful mercy 
Sacrificed on a tree 

Come down 
Come down 
Like a waterfall, please 
Take me home 
This is my plea 
Bring your fire 
Free all my needs 
I bow down at the altar 
 Now you belong to me 

Father, Father 
How can it be? 
What have I done? 
That you would help me see? 
Take me, use me 
In all that I am 
I'll sing out your name 
For you are the Lamb! 

Reign all 
Rule all 
Like the King you are 
Jesus, Yahweh 
The day isn't far 
 I can't escape you 
You're more than I need 
Beautiful one... 
I believe

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LarryB commented on I Believe

10-09-2010

An Awesome write Hanna....With Great rhyme.....Larry

FreeBird02 commented on I Believe

05-13-2010

HannahLynn this is a very insightful and well structured poem. Each stanza enlightens the one before. This style has brought an enhancement to search for the full and true meaning you have to offer. Great Job.

Qualin commented on I Believe

05-13-2010

IT IS SO AWSOME TO KNOW SOMEONE YOR AGE IS WRITING POEMS NOT ONLY VERY GOOD BUT THE SUBJECT IS SO NECESSARY FOR THIS TIME...FROM ALL SIGNS IS COMING TO AN END VERY SOON !! fOR i AM THE LAST GENERATIONi SEE MY FRIENDS DIEING CONSTANTLY,i TRY ANY WAY I CAN TO LEAD THEM TO THE lORD,FOR IF YO SAY I AM YOR FRIEND THE GREATEST THING YOU CAN GIVE ANYONE ABOVE ALL RICHES IS THE DIRECTION TO EVER LASTING LIFE !! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS GREAT POEM IT IS A 10X10 FOR ME...YOUR FRIEND QUALIN

HannahLynn commented on I Believe

04-08-2010

Thank you!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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