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    Haha. I'm not sure where this came from in my mind, but I decided to keep it. Hope you like it. :]


    Well it's not Valentine's Day
    Yes, I'm aware
    But you look mighty good today
    I like your red hair
    The sun don't stop the rain
    And the rain don't stop the shine
    It's either now or forever
    So, will you be mine?

    We'll walk beneath a rainbow
    Colorful like carebears
    Hold hands in cold weather
    Then ride rides at the fair
    Lets dance like its 1920
    Live in that stolen time
    God wrote it out for me
    That you would be mine

    I said I'd give you skittles
    Or even a hug
    You said you want the red ones
    And that was enough
    Here we are kissing
    It happens in time
    Ten years later and counting
    You'll always be mine


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    summerrose35 commented on Mine


    This is a wonderfully lighthearted read,so sweet and pure.I loved it!You are very talented!Kuddos!

    Papa commented on Mine


    Only in Alabama can skittles be romantic. I loved it. Roll Tide.

    Rhymer commented on Mine


    Candt sweet poem I like skittles too, 10 from me.................



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