Me

To be another silhouette in a sunset
To be another face in the crowd
To love pictures of black and white
It creates me somehow
To have faith in what I cannot see
To dance my way up when I am down
To twirl freely in this world
It creates me somehow
To dream like I have nothing to lose
To sing just to make a sound
To pray in the silence of the night
It creates me...somehow

 

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train64 commented on Me

02-02-2011

So well written! I enjoyed every word and line good stuff. T64

StandingBear commented on Me

01-04-2011

A highly inspired write, stemming from an unfathomable source of positive energy. Excellent!

gogant commented on Me

01-04-2011

Just sing and dance to your own symphony, and you will be as you want to be, and be what you are...........Lovely................g

tenderpoison commented on Me

01-03-2011

that is by far one of the best perspectives I've ever seen. very well done :) 10

catharss101 commented on Me

01-03-2011

beautiful youthful energy. could be a song.. somehow

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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