Where Did You Go?


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Wrote this as a song in my head. Hopefully it translates to a poem as well. :)

Where Did You Go?

In the night
I felt you near
Though you're away now
I still hear
Every word
You said to me
And now I say
Please don't leave

Where have you gone?
You could follow me
I'd lead you home
We'd stay in between
These hollow walls
You built for me
Oh dear, please

Well I don't
Like being weak
But just for you
I'm on my knees
For in my head
You're all I need
Should I believe,
in the thoughts?
In these dreams?

Where did you go?
You needed space to think
You love me so
I'm so glad you see
All the stars
That led you back
Back to these walls
You built for me

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Helios commented on Where Did You Go?


Lyricism is a great talent to have, especially when the darkness of night comes calling. A nice song [if you write a melody for it].

StandingBear commented on Where Did You Go?


Nicely written song you have playing in your head, and translated into a fine poem also. SBear

Phoenix9 commented on Where Did You Go?


very much a tune rolls around inside of me as i read this, the flow is musical and takes you on a ride, Great job,, PHOENIX

JadedJezzabel commented on Where Did You Go?


very well written.......i know this feeling well...........

BrokenHeart2009 commented on Where Did You Go?


It does sound like a song. It is sounds mystical. 10 from me:)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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