Chapters of love

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  • silentwriter
  • There is Salvation and Damnnation within the choice of words we define ourselves with.

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Love can be sweet, and love can be kind,but Oh my gosh I think sometimes I'm blind !!!! HA HA HA! OK kidding I have been blessed in my life with Love but I am not yet to the end of the book I am looking forward to the end. I think I will truly be surprised at the leading character at my side. You know who you are "dear" so don't be too surprised when you see me as the main character in your book!

Chapters of love

O' what words lovers speak when trying to lure the prey that they seek.

I love you, I need you, your my whole world, until they see the next boy or girl.

Silliness and passion become a must, but what happened to old fashion respect and trust?

Promises of loyalty until they are grey, fade with the temptation of youth the very next day.

Tis sad this tale of lust gone cold, but real as the earth and just as old.

Then along comes true love and no words need be said, because the very image of your lover is burned in your head.

The way they walk, talk, and even how they take a breath become to you a matter of life and death.

It goes far deeper then physical needs or empty promises that neither can keep. It is an intimacy so deep inside that it makes your soul weep.

O' but time controls this story with many chapters of happiness and woe, If you close the book to soon you'll never know just  how the ending will go.




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jmylez commented on Chapters of love

07-04-2009

i have a poem called THE LOVE OF OLD and u are so right about love in this manner,,,u a very good writer,,keep doin ur thing,,,good job

laydbak1 commented on Chapters of love

06-14-2009

I enjoyed the logic and flow on this one... This story is ancient and been told a hundred million different ways... Your version would be one of the better of the recent ones... A good write...

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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