Come Closer Please

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    Come Closer Please

    You ask me to come closer, I am here,
    I love when you whisper those sweet nothings in my ear.
    I am closer still, sighing with your embrace,
    Loving the way you brush my hair from my face.

    Closer once again, to look back at your eyes of blue,
    Seeing and returning that look of love so true.

    Closer yet again, lying next to you in bed,
    The love we make leaves memories in my head.
    Closer, for the remainder of our lives together,
    We will dream and share always, and part never...
    (c) luvshorses

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    cinque commented on Come Closer Please

    07-25-2009

    VERY EXPRESSIVE, LOVED IT! I LOVE THE INTIMACY AND OPENESS OF THE HEART.
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    california commented on Come Closer Please

    07-14-2009

    very, very nice............ Ashort poem that tells you much. Nice to see something on here besides what I call free -- style. thanxx
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    luvshorses

    07/16/2009

    Aww, thank you right kindly for the nice comment. And I do believe that we will all find exactly what we seek if we keep an open mind and heart.

    sxygrneyes874 commented on Come Closer Please

    04-30-2009

    Nice , I think we all are looking for it in the end.
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    luvshorses

    07/16/2009

    Sorry not to respond before this... life has a funny way of sidetracking us all... I thank you for the comment and I do believe as you we are all hoping for that in the end.. someone that will accept and love us for who we are.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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