Look At Me!!!!!

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    Look At Me!!!!!

    Look at me! Tell me, what do you see?
    The one I tried so hard to be?
    Or do you look right past my eyes,
    Avoiding, once again, my silent cries.

    Can you see what I am inside?
    Or has that flicker of love truly died?
    You answer not, no words do I hear
    My heart beats harder, it is as I fear.

    I came to you in my hour of need,
    I wanted only for my hurt to be freed.
    Look at me, tell me, do you still love me?
    But only silence was returned to my plea.

    The tears now roll down my pale face
    For I know, in your heart I have no place.
    That heart you once promised belonged to me,
    Has been given to another and so it must be.

    My knees now feel weak and my insides are trembling,
    I look down at my hand, and slowly take off my ring.
    I remember the day when we were joined and two became one
    How could you, alone, decide when “we” were done?

    Look at me! Tell me, NOW what do you see?
    A broken heart? a scarred soul? NO, this is not me.
    I am like the Phoenix, and I will once again find love,
    Because, you see, I believe in the power above.

    Though you may not want who I am and all I can be
    I know I will find another that WILL love me.
    My heart is an old, genuine and warm one
    And I know that my life is not yet done.

    Look at me! Tell me, now do you see?
    The depth and the character that comprises me?
    I have loved from deep within my heart,
    Perhaps it is, indeed, best we part.

    Look at me! Tell me, what is it that you now see?
    It is just a heart full of love that you have set free.

    - written & copyrighted by luvshorses 1999 -

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    PRober commented on Look At Me!!!!!

    07-12-2009

    oh babe... I couldn't relate any more to a single poem than this one! Very good job indeed... the best writing are always straight from the heart! Thanks for posting this one, very inspirational!

    luvshorses

    07/14/2009

    Thank you again for the nice comment. Most of my writings have been from the heart. Carol

    kdarcy commented on Look At Me!!!!!

    04-11-2009

    Been there done that, well said, thanks for sharing

    luvshorses

    07/14/2009

    Thank you for the comment.. I don't get the chance to come to the site much in the spring/summer/fall.. thank you for the comment.

    bandit1192 commented on Look At Me!!!!!

    01-09-2009

    Been there, too. You made me remember the loneliness of divorce. I have the sequel(Picking Up the Pieces) Keping the good work

    luvshorses

    07/14/2009

    Thank you. The loneliness was deep, but the end of it was a relief.. and now.. well, look at me!

    tanyajules622 commented on Look At Me!!!!!

    11-25-2008

    I love your poem. When I read it feels as if you are discribing me

    gronay commented on Look At Me!!!!!

    11-16-2008

    Very nice poem, as it reflects my own "exact" experience. Thank you for putting it on paper :)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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