Desert Sunset :

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Desert Sunset :

    Looking up at a relentless fire, time goes by and it turns into a softer yellow that turns to gold and at sunset the sky would flame red and orange before it faded to purple and gave way to a carpet of stars . Stars that reminded me of you, like rain had washed away the dust from the skys . I sense your heart in the nights air, your with me these moments I find to be alone in this death striken land . And then a shooting star flys by as if you were telling me you missed me too . And out of the tail of the shooting star I see your eyes looking back at me , A connection with you is felt in the heart but as fast as you came you left and there I was alone again, and with every blink after that comes the sting of the moment , and all I want is you in my arms, I want to feel your love for me , through your tender lips as they kiss mine ...

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    Paradice21 commented on Desert Sunset :

    01-07-2009

    This is a very great poem. It makes me feel as if I am there seizing the moment with you. Nicely put!

    allenjermy commented on Desert Sunset :

    01-02-2009

    This one is a 10, i gave you a ten, this is beautiful and written very well. I have a shooting star momory with angel and i,looking up at the nights sky,in our new love together, like God smiled upon us for finding each other...Don Folks

    bforibus commented on Desert Sunset :

    12-26-2008

    very colorful and poetic. i enjoyed this one also

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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