Forbidden Action

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Forbidden Action

    Forbidden Action:

    Saying hello, or good bye-one last time,

    Missing you,

    Dreaming of you,

    Waiting for you,

    Do you remember me?

    Why did you leave me alone…. in the middle of a war?

    Left to die with a broken heart,

    Given nothing but excuses and lies,

    The damage is done, so I guess I'll be dying alone,

    Look at the man you destroyed, you created,

    All alone in this crowded world around me,

    It sure would be nice to find what so many take for granted.

    When I think of Love I think of the truth,

    I think of something so strong that the only thing that can brake it apart is adultery.

    For me it's about something so precious… something… I adore so much… that the rest of life seems to fade away.

    But at this time I don't have that blessing, that blessing to share life and my heart with,…what I want to call my soul mate.

    So I ride my horse in search of answers while praying silently to GOD for direction

    Now calm but un-relaxed I search to the sky's for peace in my heart and receiving a piece heaven instead

    With hope in "the" Love I Dance with what little I have left trying to make a difference while also speaking through my every step.

    And on GOD's day retiring to his house for review…

    You say your sorry but you don't think your wrong for what you've done.

    You think of the good times as mistakes and the bad as if it's always been.

    Your quick to blame and slow to look around and understand.

    I wont hate you, I'm not angry with you….but

    I love you, and I'm hurt by you

    Always And Forever

    Yours till death take me away from your memory

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Forbidden Action

    09-02-2010

    You are an awesome writer, and I love the emotion. I know it is written out of pain, but it is beautiful. The way you speak out of you soul and the hope you feel.

    beautifuldeath commented on Forbidden Action

    01-20-2009

    such pain. good write

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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