Voices attacking the Heart

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Voices attacking the Heart

    Why dont you give it away

    What you thought was true

    What you thought you two had as one

    She left you in the middle of a Desert

    You came back for her

    But she wasnt standing there to welcome you home

    Why dont you give it away

    Your waiting for her to see your love there

    You hope she knows your Love is true to her

    She's moved on

    She's forgotten your heart already

    Why dont you give it away

    Why dont you move on

    Why dont you forget her name

    Why do you suffer for her

    Why dont you throw away whats so dear to you......????......

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    nickyssecrets commented on Voices attacking the Heart

    05-03-2009

    I enjoy the third person narative on this.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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