Long Sleep for the Hearts wait...

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Long Sleep for the Hearts wait...

    Let a murder kill me in the night

    Let a car hit me on the road

    When it’s my time it’s my time

    Just don’t let that time be without her

    I don’t want to live without her

    I’d rather meet my maker

    Than another breath without her

    She’s the happiness in my heart

    In my life

    Please GOD let her return soon

    I Love her Always and forever

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    bforibus commented on Long Sleep for the Hearts wait...

    07-12-2009

    I just read a longing poem but this one blows that one out of the longing area. this one was pleading and begging and hoping and not taking a no for an answer demanding. great job on the flow and emotion put into it.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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