A Broken Hearts friends

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    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    A Broken Hearts friends

    A truly broken heart has no friends
    No one understands the importance of waiting for the love of your life
    They tell you to move on
    They tell you you’ll find someone better
    They themselves are not alone
    They’ve never given all their heart to just one love
    Others are already married and are naive to the circumstances
    Yet you still cry out for comfort from them
    They get at you for not taking their advice
    Feels more like orders now
    They stop calling you
    They stop answering your calls
    They don’t feel like friends anymore
    They’ve done the same thing as she did to the heart
    Abandoned you when you needed them most
    There is no comfort from any other person, for a broken heart
    You must learn to live alone because that is the unjust curse of the
    One you love,
    Why talk to anyone any more
    Once they learn the truth, hear the story
    They’ll just blow you off like the friends you had
    Try to hide it, try to live past it
    But it’s changed you too much
    It defines you now
    What a cruel thing she’s done to your heart
    What a cruel thing your “friends” have done to you
    A broken heart has only it’s Love for her
    And so it holds on with dear life
    For the one it Loves
    Without a single friend

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    nickyssecrets commented on A Broken Hearts friends

    05-03-2009

    This is so far one of my favourites! I feel your emotions clearly. But please remember that there are some people you have still! Heads up and full steam ahead! :)

    mistyparish commented on A Broken Hearts friends

    03-24-2009

    This is awesome. I really like it.

    adri88crys commented on A Broken Hearts friends

    01-27-2009

    Hi there, The Poem Is Very Great!! I Had Tears Reading It. I Had Something Similar Happen 2 Me But I Finally Found My True Soulmate & So Will You

    bforibus commented on A Broken Hearts friends

    01-21-2009

    awwww dont make me feel bad last. aight try one more time and ill pick up. u have made me feel like the worse. this poem is sooo profound and it hit me in the face like a cold brick. i here u buddy and ill stop and be one of the ones to see the silve

    magicmanzz commented on A Broken Hearts friends

    01-21-2009

    i like the way you write coodo'ss to you that means nice job

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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