Sunday

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Sunday
    Got up early with the rising sun
    First thought of the day
    I miss her
    Second thought of the day
    I love her
    Blue tie, 3 point black suit
    I’m dressed
    Crying out for my LORD
    Looking for answers, for comfort
    Just want some time alone with my maker
    The rest just fades away as I hide away
    Below all the Church sings, smiles, worships, prays for each other
    Unnoticed and alone with my King, I cry, I beg, and pray for her return
    GOD looks on the Heart
    He see’s a Heart in ruins over a lost True Love
    The world looks to what it see’s
    They see a quiet man who looks unrelaxed and very serous
    The rest seems to just stay away
    Will this moment last forever
    Alone till rose buds bloom again
    End of day nears
    Table for one
    Cruel mind pretends she’s there with me
    Talking, laughing, smiling
    Like the couples around
    Long drive home
    Stars shine above
    The same stars her and I would admire together
    Home at last
    I look to my pocket watch
    I pray for her well being and return
    This was my Sunday…

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    kenparme commented on Sunday

    03-31-2009

    This is a great poem-very moving-raw and honest.
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    chadallac74 commented on Sunday

    02-16-2009

    I liked it... I gave you a 10 and even though I found one mis spelling, "serious", now seriously, nice job!
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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