Pain

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Pain

    I remember every word spoken
    I remember every tender touch
    I miss every moment
    I still value each and every one of them
    Still fresh in my Heart
    My Love not to lose its edge for her
    She will not be forgotten
    I do not intend to let go
    She was one of those you only find once in a life time
    It’s hard to move on when your heart refuses
    No “will” to let go
    She was perfect in every way up till the end when she was no longer Herself
    Waiting for my last breath to free me from her
    Since her Love wont
    Let time bring me closer to that moment of freedom at last
    I hope she visit’s my memory when I leave this world
    Let my tombstone reflect I waited for her Faithfully till my last
    What she does from there is up to her
    For the first time her heart will truly be apart from my Love
    She won’t be able to figure out why she feels
    Empty, like something’s missing
    A look into her mere and she won’t see that twinkle in her eyes
    Anymore
    She finally cry’s….???
    For a reason she still can’t figure out

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    bforibus commented on Pain

    01-22-2009

    that's close to impossible. keep up the good work...dps

    bforibus commented on Pain

    01-22-2009

    I swear you have the most sincere way of showing that you have lost someone. it's a constant feel, letting anyone know that reads your work that these are your soul's stories. i wish i could change your views on love, but this poem and others show me

    allenjermy commented on Pain

    01-21-2009

    I know how you feel,man. I have one love my soulmate, Angel. She gave up on our love, a love that i promised God I would love endlessly. my soulmate.I will wait til the end of time for her, becuz i have to...Don Folks

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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