dinosaurs

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    dinosaurs

    with claws that scratch
    and jaws that bite
    his great and mighty roar

    through time gone past
    and days long gone
    the fearsome tyrannosaur

    eighty feet tall
    with a neck of steel
    he grazes on the trees

    appatosaurus
    looks around
    and eats whatever he sees

    he spreads his wings
    and rules the sky
    the majestic pteranadon

    but now i look
    into the sky
    and see that he is gone






    written by joel
    age 11

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    spbsdude commented on dinosaurs

    09-30-2010

    What a nice poem by a talented 11 year old. The rhyme scheme and images were very nice.

    kesavkavumthara commented on dinosaurs

    03-26-2010

    Ya...a good poem...very fluent and attractive...thx

    janet commented on dinosaurs

    02-27-2010

    what a great poem joel i bet you could write one just as good if not better by yourself especially about dinosaurs:) i love you

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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