the elfin king

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    the elfin king

    the light did break

    the ties that bound

    the elfin king of lore

     

    the gifted sage

    the mighty mage

    the champion of war

     

    he lay long bound

    beneath the ground

    til love would break his chains

     

    to heal his heart

    and mend his sword

    and bring the gentle rains

     

    he fought no more

    nor stood his ground

    against the darkened sky

     

    and when the battle cry

    did wane

    he batted not his eye

     

    for to be a king

    and love his land

    and save his lady wife

     

    on bended knee

    and battered face

    he offered up his life

     

     

     

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    crazydude commented on the elfin king

    08-11-2010

    touching poem. makes you look at your heart. sounds a little like what jesus did. loved it!!! :)))))))))

    xxlheart commented on the elfin king

    08-17-2009

    exceptionally written! but oh so sad as is any true love story. love.me.

    janet

    08/17/2009

    i think i even cried a little when i wrote it:)

    WordSlinger commented on the elfin king

    07-26-2009

    I enjoyed this, mystical and great. I think you did good on this into ever aspect.

    janet

    07/26/2009

    thank you:)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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