the shinicles


  • Fantasy

    the shinicles

    All night long and every night
    When mama puts out the light
    I see the Shinicles swimming by
    As plain as day before my eyes

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on the shinicles


    ah very nice write dear, with a nice lymrical flow with your rhymes......short but it says a so much.......well asha

    spbsdude commented on the shinicles


    Short and to the point. I would like to hear more about the swimming Shinicles, that would be interesting. Why do they swim?

    gogant commented on the shinicles


    When the lights go out, there are all kinds of things to see...and do..........................Short and to the point.......................gogant

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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