the shinicles

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    the shinicles

    All night long and every night
    When mama puts out the light
    I see the Shinicles swimming by
    As plain as day before my eyes

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on the shinicles

    10-14-2010

    ah very nice write dear, with a nice lymrical flow with your rhymes......short but it says a so much.......well done.......love asha

    spbsdude commented on the shinicles

    09-30-2010

    Short and to the point. I would like to hear more about the swimming Shinicles, that would be interesting. Why do they swim?

    gogant commented on the shinicles

    04-27-2010

    When the lights go out, there are all kinds of things to see...and do..........................Short and to the point.......................gogant

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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