the shinicles

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    the shinicles

     All night long and every night
    When mama puts out the light
    I see the Shinicles swimming by
    As plain as day before my eyes

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on the shinicles

    10-14-2010

    ah very nice write dear, with a nice lymrical flow with your rhymes......short but it says a so much.......well done.......love asha
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    spbsdude commented on the shinicles

    09-30-2010

    Short and to the point. I would like to hear more about the swimming Shinicles, that would be interesting. Why do they swim?
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    gogant commented on the shinicles

    04-27-2010

    When the lights go out, there are all kinds of things to see...and do..........................Short and to the point.......................gogant
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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