vacancy

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    vacancy

    what is this thrill i feel inside
    that makes me smile and hum
    what does it mean to dance and sing
    underneath your thumb
    oh floating
    soar
    faithlessness
    no more
    my heart i think is free
    or is this space
    in which i race
    a simple vacancy

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    Drivingczar commented on vacancy

    04-12-2009

    Brief and flowing! Good write!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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