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written by my son joel
age 10


the woods are very lonely
the woods are very green
the woods are very grassy
and they're lovely in the spring

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xxlheart commented on woods


absolutely adorable and oh BTW well written!!!! they say this must be 50 characters, however on a short poem that is hard to do. so rather than not post anything on a fine piece of art i will ramble until i have enough characters to be acceptable :)

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

janet’s Poems (15)

Title Comments
Title Comments
one day 6
the shinicles 3
dinosaurs 3
the sea 2
the king 4
God's nature 2
woods 1
the elfin king 3
me lost 1
the softness on my face 1
vacancy 1
the very air 2
if 2
the cage 3