• Epic


    if i saw you in a thousand years
    through blood sweat and many tears
    and offered to take away your fears
    would you take my hand

    if you looked into my heart of old
    and saw the heat and felt the cold
    but also felt the beat so bold
    would you take a stand

    then showing to you all i can
    to see that i too am mere man
    but you my love are my greatest fan
    and my soul you do command

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    bluskyinthenite commented on if


    sweet i love this little rhyme it flows with each breath you took to write. wonderful poet

    gogant commented on if


    A lovely musical piece of poetry.......I applaud your rhyming scheme, Janet.............................................................gogant

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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